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"Come." He always imposed, never suggesting.
:iconnarutoninja44:
For #SixWordStories 52 Week Six Word Story Challenge - Write a story in which the first letter of all six words (of the story) formulates a word.

(c) Naruto Ninja44
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^3wyl Jan 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I like this!

It feels as if... I don't know. There's a certain mystery to it, in a way, especially with the single command of "Come", which we hear of quite often, I think, in other books, movies and so on.

I think you've summed it effectively and I like how you've made it fit with the words you've used.

Not bad. :nod:
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:iconnarutoninja44:
Yay I've finally impressed 3wyl! My mission in life has been accomplished! [/jokes]

Thanks, though. I thought making the word that the story made fit with the story itself was the point. Or maybe I was just overthinking this. Oh well. Still, glad you liked it! =D
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^3wyl Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:

Nah, I get what you mean. :D
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:iconstellasalvata:
Completely brilliant! I was honestly sort of distractedly skimming and this caught my attention immediately. What makes it so unique is that it could easily be a line from a book because of its structure, and yet it stands wonderfully on its own.
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:iconnarutoninja44:
Thank you! I was going for that direction with this piece. =)
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:iconstellasalvata:
You're welcome! :hug:
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:iconstarry-owl:
This is great, :) Very clever, I think!
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:iconnarutoninja44:
Thank you!
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:iconstarry-owl:
No problem! :)
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~chocopie5 Jan 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
WOAH. i see what you did there. :iconhurrplz:
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