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It feels as if... I don't know. There's a certain mystery to it, in a way, especially with the single command of "Come", which we hear of quite often, I think, in other books, movies and so on.
I think you've summed it effectively and I like how you've made it fit with the words you've used.
Not bad.
Thanks, though. I thought making the word that the story made fit with the story itself was the point. Or maybe I was just overthinking this. Oh well. Still, glad you liked it!
Nah, I get what you mean.